During this test, there are many things I can do to increase my score. Overall, I got the main idea correct. I just did not support my argument well enough. There were many things I could do to strengthen my arguments. By providing more definitions (I only included 3 or 4 in the first section) and providing real world examples I could support my argument better. Also, my examples were not detailed enough. So, when I use more examples, I need to include more depth. Overall, I think I can approve much between now and the next test. Thank you Ms. Q for your help and comments on improvement!!