End of Unit Test for Section 4

During this test, there are many things I can do to increase my score.  Overall, I got the main idea correct.  I just did not support my argument well enough.  There were many things I could do to strengthen my arguments.  By providing more definitions (I only included 3 or 4 in the first section) and providing real world examples I could support my argument better.  Also, my examples were not detailed enough.  So, when I use more examples, I need to include more depth.  Overall, I think I can approve much between now and the next test.  Thank you Ms. Q for your help and comments on improvement!!